Louder Than Words

This is inspired by the song actually...

Can you see the pain in my chest?
Well if you haven't noticed the actions I have been taking,
Doing this and that,
To get your attention,
You've seen me do it,
But actions are louder than words,
How long will it take you to realize what is going on?
My actions are speaking louder than my words.
My wrists have been split open repeatedly.
How can you just sit their and not notice it?
Do I have to do this?
My actions are speaking louder than my words.
I know you can see what I have been doing,
But why haven't you stopped me yet?
I guess this is goodbye since you did this to yourself.
I left everyone thanks to you.
Now you know actions speak louder than words.

Reviews

[deeps]

i like this it is wonderful

[Shin]

Actions definently are louder than words, I like how you expressed it in this poem, like a wake up and smell the coffee, it's a great poem, I liked it.