1 Day

1 day left,
So I my mind could be clear,
Slowly and surely my memory is fading,
I wish you were still here,
So I can feel your touch,
See your laugh,
So I can smile,
You made me me smile all the time,
Just thinking about you makes me cry,
Insomnia even more abundant,
I miss you,
I really do.

Reviews

[Shin]

Missing a person can hurt a lot, specially if you're not talking anymore, it's happened to me a few times before, but in the end it always turned out well... it was a very emotional poem, very deep, I'll be sure to be reading some more of your work, keep it up and don't lose hope, there's always hope.

[deeps]

This is so full of powerful emotion

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"Just thinking about you makes me cry,
Insomnia even more abundant,
I miss you,
I really do."

Awwww--a great gorgeous beautiful love poem...Awwwwsome...:-)

james:-)