Every Breath

Every breath,
You drew,
Made me take a breath too,
Every breath,
I took,
Was something you wanted to see,
To make sure I was alive,
Because you were the only one who cared,
You watched me,
As I took that breath,
Every breath,
Was because of you,
And thanks to you I'm still alive...

Reviews

[Katie Louise Hughes]

This was great, I like the selflessness to this one. Thanks and keep up the writing! :D

[Marlena]

I loved it. Very sweet, kind of dark, but very nice. Good work, just fix that little typo in line four and it'll be perfect :)

[snapstache]

awww so cute :) but one mistake i think it was supposed to be breath (brea-th) no breathe (bree-th-e) cause it doesn't make sense that way..took me a minute to get that but otherwise great job :)
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[Love Is Dead]

Wow!so beautiful.I love it.

[Leanne Conway]

Awe, This is so sweet and a little sad. I love it. =). Just remember I love you aswell best friend. =)