Final Moment

The final moment,

Has been revealed,

No more suffering,

For him,

Or her,

His final moment,

Will be with,

The woman he loves,

Her final moment,

Will be with him,

They are both so happy,

But then he died,

A few years later,

From the cancer that killed him,

She cried every day,

Until an idea popped into her head,

She would join him,

She got a gun,

But then she had a vision,

It was her love,

Saying “Please don’t kill yourself”,

She nodded and had tears,

He said one more thing,

“That was my final moment and you made me so happy.”

 

 

Reviews

[Desert Dreamer]

Wonderful, heartwarming poem, that shows the importance of showing our love to our loved ones, especially in their final days. This is very well written.

[deeps]

She got a gun,
But then she had a vision,
It was her love,
Saying “Please don’t kill yourself”,
She nodded and had tears,
He said one more thing,
“That was my final moment and you made me so happy.”

I liked this part th ebest, This is a wonderful write,
i can feel the emotion.