Tan Eyed Girl

Tan eyed girl,

With bronze skin,

I see your hurting,

Your tan eyes filled with tears,

I see that you were crying,

Though you are not really a human,

You are like a puppet,

Tan eyed girl,

Please stop crying,

I can’t stand to see you,

Crying that much,

Tan eyed girl,

Your nails are cutting into your skin,

It is around your eyes all the cuts.

Tan eyed girl,

Please stop,

I love you.

Reviews

[Rapterj]

Very dark. I think the repetition, along with your spoecific diction, helps brings out the sincerity of the situation. Kind of feels like you're watching someone, or even yourself, tear themselves to pieces...

[DeadToTheWorld]

This was a rather nice description of someone that Is watching another or that they are speaking of themselves.

~ TheMadGothicHatter. ~