I'm Not Coming Back

I'm Not Coming Back

A Poem by Angie Diane♥♥

I'm not coming back,
I've been hurt for the last time,
I don't want to go through everything I've gone through before.

I don't know how to say this,
And I don't know what to do,
I have had it up to here with you.

I'm not coming back,
I've been hurt for the last time,
I don't want to go through everything I've gone through before.

The lies have become unbearable,
The lies keep continuing,
Keep coming because you don't know what you want.

I'm not coming back,
I've been hurt for the last time,
I don't want to go through everything I've gone through before.

I fear it is too late for us,
Because I want it to end,
You know you do too.

I'm not coming back,
I've been hurt for the last time,
I don't want to go through everything I've gone through before.

I have seen you with so many other people,
Not with me,
And it's killing me.

I'm not coming back,
I've been hurt for the last time,
I don't want to go through everything I've gone through before.

I know you used to love me,
But what happened to that,
Did you just fall out of love?

I'm not coming back,
I've been hurt for the last time,
I don't want to go through everything I've gone through before.

I think this is the last time we will see each other,
Because I have had it up to here,
With the lies you have been telling me.

Now I want you to know,
That I'm not coming back,
I don't want to deal with you.

I think this will be the last time,
You see me,
Coming to your house.

Because I'm not coming back,
We are done,
I am finished.

Leave,
Get out,
See you.

Maybe we will settle this,
But for now,
No, it won't be settled.

I'm not coming back,
I've been hurt for the last time,
I don't want to go through everything I've gone through before.

I don't want to keep getting hurt by your selfishness,
And I'm done,
Bye now.

Cause I'm not coming back,
I've been hurt for the last time,
I don't want to go through everything I've gone through before.



© 2010 Angie Diane♥♥


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very emotional there...

I understand n can relate with this writing..
I've been there and almost the same thing happen...
I love this one...:)

Posted 15 Years Ago


Nice emotion showing through in this, very raw. I can feel your hurt and anger here- but I think that stanza that you have repeating through the whole poem is a little over done. Maybe keep it from every other stanza to every two? And, "I fear it is to late for us,
Because I want it to end," Wrong 'too' in that first line.

Anyway, I liked it. Nice work :3

Posted 15 Years Ago


Some people are only out to hurt you. I know that feeling.
this is amazing, I love the emotion.

Posted 15 Years Ago


i LOVE this, Good Write. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Angie Diane♥♥
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Hello, I'm Angie! I'm going to be 32 soon. Writing is something I love doing. I'm glad to be creating again. Also, I love anime, reading, and many other hobbies. Lately, I've been making YouTube v.. more..