Burning Down These Walls.

I think this is unfinished...tell me what you think.

I need to stop,
Burning down these walls,
Because I don't know,
If I can open up to you anymore.

These walls have been burned down,
Several times in the past,
But I need to stop,
I need to keep them up.

I am hiding my feelings.
I know that I can tell you everything,
But I can't burn down these walls,
Because it hurts.

Reviews

[Marlena]

Hmm...I like this, but I feel like it's only an outline of what could become a really great poem. Between the second and third stanza, I think you should add more about hiding your feelings and needing those walls. Make it more clear what's what, and what your trying to hide or maybe WHY you're hiding it, and this could be awesome. Good work so far :)