Can't Move On

Please don't be harsh...this is still for my friend that died...and the one that killed himself...dedicated to both.

I can't move on,
Because I miss you too much,
I love you still,
And I can't move on.

When you died my life changed,
It broke my heart when I knew,
I would never see you again,
I've tried and tried.

But I can't move on,
Because I miss you too much,
I love you still,
And I can't move on.

Being younger than me,
Showed how much younger you can die at,
Even though you weren't an infant,
You were still you.

And that is why I can't move on,
I miss you too much,
And I love you still,
And now I can't move on.

Reviews

[Marlena]

You've got such an intense feeling of helplessness and heartbreak in here that I think you should continue it. Don't get me wrong, it's awesome as it is, as a tribute to your friends and all, but I feel like you must have left something unsaid, like maybe there's a message to your friends you should get out it. I could be wrong, I'm not you, but it feels a little unfinished.

As it is, this a great tribute to your friends. Good work :)