Have I Told You?

I just felt like writing it. I might add more onto it later.

Have I told you,
That I loved you recently?
Have I told you,
That you are the only reason I'm breathing?
Have I told you,
I haven't thought about hurting myself or anyone?
Have I told you,
How much I want you to hold me?
Have I told you,
Everything you needed to know?

Reviews

[AllyKinzz:)]

Sweet and cute at the same time. I enjoyed this. :D

[Blue tailed kite]

I really liked this poem... its so simple, but it expresses so much, sometimes we do feel that we dont express exactly how much someone means to us. Nice write.

[R E Tree]

This is totally directed at the reader it makes them feel totally involved. I like that as it brings an affect on the reader. Poems are powerful when they bring such an affect. I think you should keep writing because yours is one of a kind