In Whatever Time We Have

Title is based off a song.

In whatever time we have,
Let's just be happy.
No more pain,
No more hurt.

In whatever time we have,
Let's be devoted to each other,
Because I love you with all my heart,
And I hope I'm in your heart.

In whatever time we have,
Let's make a promise,
Of love,
And happiness as well.

In whatever time we have,
We need to live for each other,
Because we both need it,
And we love each other.

In whatever time we have,
Let's just be happy,
Smiling,
And kind to others.

In whatever time we have,
Let's be joyous,
Together forever,
We will have a bond.

In whatever time we have,
We will always love each other,
And we will be there for each other,
You and I both know this.

In whatever time we have,
Let's just be happy.
No more pain,
No more hurt.

Reviews

[Jonathan De Elvira]

cute I supposed...very well cheered and pretty considerate...
I'll give you a strong mark for this piece...The overall status for this writing is that this is beautifully written...

but as for personal indicative, I'm not agreeing one bit within this write...

[Matt Shriver]

Great use of time. Very well written. You can really get a feel for how much emotion went into writing this. It was very enjoyable to read. I can see why it won a place in the contest. Well done.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Good use of our time is a good topic for a poem for sure..Good job with the presentation of the topic..Sunflower

[The Water Queen]

This is a sweet and lovely write that hits the soul. It speaks of time running out and just spending it with another person. Great Poem!!

[Sean M. Addams]

i like this kind of like a speech but filled with hope ... overall I thought you did well on this ... a very heartfelt piece..

[watch_the_world]

LOVE LOVE LOVE THE EMOTION IN THIS! xD its amazing great great write, xD

what song is it based off of? just out of curiosity,

make the most of every second that you have with that someone,