Creepy Monster

You saw something,
In the corner of your eye,
It had creepy blue hair,
You noticed before,
It had disappeared,
When you turned around,
You saw the creepy monster,
The creepy monster,
Had creepy black eyes,
Creepy blue hair,
Creepy red rings,
Once you saw,
The creepy monster,
You fainted at the scene,
The creepy monster,
Ate your body,
You were never seen again.

Reviews

[Adam :P]

this one reminds me of when i was young, never really scared of monsters, but just brings back stuff i was scared of like bee's rollercoasters. lol
good poem though.

[Michael X]

I love any thing that has to do with monsters, this poem is fun and
captures the creep effect to ponder, and such detailed personaliy,
the reader can't help but feel the creepy monster or those things that
lurk in the shadows, awsome job, thanks for sharing your talent.

[Escape My Fate]

This reminded me of all the creepy monsters at my school. And how they feed off of fear. Great job. Loved it