Down, Down

Down, down,

The person fell,

Trying to hold on to hope.

 

Down, down,

Came her emotions,

She poured them out from her soul.

 

Down, down,

She went on her knees,

Scraping them.

 

Down, down,

She fell,

Into his arms.

 

His arms,

His arms,

Were warm,

Were warm.

 

She was smiling,

Smiling,

All happy,

Happy.

 

Down, down,

The person fell,

Trying to hold on to hope.

 

With the man,

Of her life,

In her arms.

Reviews

[Shattered Kiss]

wOW, Dramatic, and Despairing, I am speechless

[Adam :P]

bittersweet good way to put it. like it. good poem.

[Emunah June.]

This is such a bittersweet poem but yet its a good read. I love it!! :D