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Afraid to lose control,

Everything I thought,

I could be,

Has fallen apart,

And broken me down,

And now I’m afraid,

I’m going to lose control,

Of myself.

I need to pick up the pieces,

And put them back together,

So I don’t lose control,

Because everything you thought,

I could be,

Is now falling apart,

And you can’t stop it,

Now you’re afraid for yourself,

Just leave me be,

And you’ll be fine,

Don’t worry about me,

Because I know what I want,

If I lose control,

Hopefully you won’t be around me,

And I’ll then be able to breathe.

 

 

Reviews

[Shattered Kiss]

And then I'll be able to breathe, Conformity suffocates, individuality liberates, be yourself, and forget what others want you to be :) your terrific as you are

[Emunah June.]

That last line is really sticking with me.

And I'll then be able to breathe.

I love that! Gives me good chills. :D

[NightShade]

These are the sentiments that I have tried to share so many times but have failed to impress upon folks that I'd rather not have experience the extent of my anguish and subsequent rage. Well done!

[kieran cruz]

This poem is very strong
I like it :)