In too Deep

This is a few ways to die...and I feel like I want too...

I’m in too deep,

I know too much,

We are walking near a cliff,

And I feel a push,

I roll,

To my death,

Down the cliff.

 

I’m in too deep,

I know too much,

I’m tired to a chair,

Tears running down my cheeks,

Gun to my head,

You pull the trigger,

And I die.

 

I’m in too deep,

I need to get out,

Before I die,                  

A slow painful death,

From your wrath,

Your anger pushing you,

You kill me in the end.

 

I’m in too deep,

But I got free.

 

My freedom,

Was my death.

Reviews

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

so sad and dark, but well written and gripping. very nice!

[Anicca]

This was a seriously scary piece of writing but beautifully written all the same. It had a wonderful fast pace which also made me feel as though you were running maybe trying to escape. Whatever, it worked. Thanks for sharing your most difficult feelings.

[watch_the_world]

:( this is really sad. Are u seeing a councilor or therapist about this? :(