15 Year Coma

15 years from now,

You will be 40.

15 years from now,

You will wake up from,

The coma,

That I put you in,

15 years from now,

You will see my face,

Smiling at you,

When you wake up,

In the hospital,

Then I will put you,

In another coma,

Every time you wake up,

I will be there,

Smiling at you,

Waiting for you,

To wake up,

So I can put you,

Into another coma.

:D

Reviews

[Dillon Cotter]

Wow, the age and writing made me think of the past and the present. It was very neat and interesting write. I like it though alot.

Will

[A]

That was fun to read :D
interesting poem, thanks for sharing.

[Emunah June.]

I cant tell...is the speaker upset about putting someone in a coma, or happy about it? I thought they were sad until I saw the face at the end.

[Alice In My Own Wonderl..]

I like this :) It kind of reminds me of a line from the song Live It Out by Metric. Keep writing :)