Bottled

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Everything is bottled up inside,
My heart is bleeding,
And internal wounds,
Killing me slowly.

Everything is bottled up inside,
Slowly pushing me to die,
And burning everything in it's path,
And it's killing me slowly.

Everything needs to be let go,
But how can I do that,
When I can't even,
Let anything I have bottled up,
Inside of me go.

I need to let this pain out,
So I don't die,
Just from the pain I'm feeling,
I need to keep,
All these bottled up emotions,
Slip away from me,
Because this might end in death.

And I know that,
Some people who love me,
Don't want to see me dead.

Author's Note

I'm really surprised that all this pain is still built up inside of me. I have anger built up in there too...but it's mostly sadness and I can't express it all because the words aren't coming out right. It's hard for me to let it out at the moment...

Reviews

[biggerthenu]

try to let go and let God thanks for sharing

[A Risen Heroine.]

I can relate to this all too well..
Nice write!

~A Fallen Heroine~

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Such a relatable poem, so many people including myself can realte to this poem:)

[Emunah June.]

Im here for you if you need to talk. I'd be so upset to know that you were dead. Please keep holding strong, if for no one else then for me. :)

[haitianprincess]

I know the feeling... But there are great tips out there to let those feelings out.

[Matthew Kult]

Honest and Sincere. Brave to be this open. Great look into your mind and eyes.

Matthew

[Light and ashes]

Great poem. Great expression of someone wanting to let go but can't seem to find the will to do so.
Be patient, I know its hard. But things will get better.