Rip

This is written from built up anger.

I want to rip,
Your heart out of your chest,
And feed it to some hungry wolves,
Because darling this is how much I hate you.

Darling, if you hadn't treated me this way,
I wouldn't want to rip your throat out.
I wouldn't want to rip off your limbs.
And hurt you.

But darling,
I want to rip your throat,
Your heart,
And your lungs out.

I will watch you,
Pointing and laughing,
As you are gasping for air,
And your body becomes lifeless.

Reviews

[Kaylor Mason]

the flow of anger gets stronger with every line, like a dam breaking loose and a wall of water crashing through

[Alicia Hirshey]

Wow.. First of all, I love how I can feel your anger just seep out of this and into my skin. I have written quite a few with anger. But this is just mind blowing. Plus the flow was amazing. It was just in your face anger. I love it. This is definitely going into my favorites.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Wow, I love the intense feeling that blows from this poem. It's really good. :)

[LizardKing]

great work it is awsome

[boston house kitten]

wow ! such emotion - its effective - and poems should be!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Haven't we all felt this for a moment or two. Captured greatly:)

[Emunah June.]

Wow! What a way to express so much emotion!! I feel along with you.

[Light and ashes]

Wow, anger just bursts out of this violently. Great work

[Miss World]

Whoa.
Pretty f*****g epic, I must say.
I loved this actually. Could relate 100%