Pathetic

It's pathetic that,
I love you so much,
And it's pathetic,
That I think you care.
It's pathetic,
That I'm not strong enough.
It's pathetic,
That I'm weaker.
It's pathetic,
That I cry over nothing.
It's pathetic,
That I believe in things I shouldn't.
It's all pathetic,
I'm tired of it.
I'm tired of being pathetic.

Reviews

[Rin]

Very good write. I enjoyed reading it. :)

[BlackMoonRising]

We all feel pathetic sometimes, either because we are not strong enough to help others, or not strong enough to handle the truth, or life itself. But we get fed up with it. We no longer want to be held down. It as short, but still great!

Good job!

[LizardKing]

i really like it. It seems to just some up pretty much how i feel

[OT]

"I'm tired of being pathetic" - so affirmative - and indeed - pathetic if you let it be almost - but it can be changed as your resolve suggests! nice!

[Emma ♥'s Eminem]

I feel like I can relate to this poem of yours. I like this poem.(:

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Well not pathetic at poem writing, love the repetition here it really brings the message home:)