You

Pain erupted through my chest,
As I heard the words you said,
I wonder now if my life is,
Worth live with you in my life,
You are the cause of my depression,
But you clearly can't see that.
My love for you is clearly still there,
But you don't care about how I feel,
Because you know how much,
Pain I have been in,
But clearly you can see you,
Don't really care.
You left me to be with her,
And you know I've seen,
Makeup on your collar,
You know that I've been,
Finding all those notes you,
Wrote for her and haven't sent out,
They made me cry,
Because they showed,
So much compassion and love,
You knew how I felt,
But you were in love with,
Someone else and you couldn't,
Really love me,
Because you don't need me,
Even though I need you,
You and you only.

Reviews

[Annie N.]

This was painfully gorgeous... A swirling mist of all the pain, love and heartbreak among life... This poem came from the lips of one bound by the chains of love, experiencing no ordinary amount of hurt... Thank you so much for sharing, this was a beautifully painted piece.

[Cassiopia Summers]

It's a good poem because it shows just how hurt she is, but how much she still wants and needs him. Good one.

[Luna Northstar]

This was a very good poem. Very touching.... I liked it a lot. It was also very powerful. Nice job =)

[~Death The Kid~ ☜..]

i like this poem very much :)...

[Linda]

Lovely poem xxx

[Ryzo]

ooooh, i can feel the pain in your chest. At the same time you're scratching at every wall of the locked room you;re in. very nicely written and great use of feelings and words, very powerful poem. :)

[Emunah June.]

What is wrong with people this day and age? Dont they know of all the pain and sadness they're causing? You poor dear. Rest assured, you deserve better. :)

[A Risen Heroine.]

Such thing hurt as hell..
You did a great job on this!
Thanks for sharing.

~A Fallen Heroine~

[brenda]

ouch ! being cheated tht must hurt a lot but nice write