You Shouldn't Have...

Free Verse...

I will never hear from you again,

This hurts me,

More than you know,

You shouldn’t have,

Done this in the first place.

 

Did you care about us?

I know at one point you did,

But in the end,

It was your decision,

That you shouldn’t have made.

 

You were a good friend to me,

I still feel bad,

For how things ended,

Between us,

But we could have worked it out.

 

We will never get that chance,

I miss you a lot,

But I’m not going to dwell on it,

At the moment,

Just remember the good times I had.

 

You shouldn't have done this,

To us,

But we know,

You loved us,

So it's time to say goodbye.

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Adam :P]

Lot of emotion and sorrow, good poem!

[Nickelass]

Good Poem!

[Canicus]

I liked this. A sense of sorrow, but also doing your best to stay strong. Good job keep it up.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I enjoyed reading this! Paper and pencil/pen always solves my sorrow :)

[biggerthenu]

touching piece and i enjoyed it and we must dewell on the good rather then the bad . stay strong and again sorry for your lost thanks for sharing

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

this was beautiful...the emotion in it...the picture i got while reading it...but i feel bad that you feel this way and that so many sad thoughts can come to your mind...besides that great write and don't forget there is someone to help whether it be family,friend,stranger,or pencil and paper

[Emunah June.]

I can see a father abandoning his family, leaving them alone to figure themselves out. Its a sad picture, and even if this isnt the case Im sorry you feel this way. Your words paint a picture of sorrowed resonance, leaving your audience to wallow in self agony. A beautiful write. Thanks for the share. :)