Hold On

Free verse

Hold on,
To life,
Because it means something.

Hold on,
To someone,
Because you may lose them.

Hold on,
Because people care,
Even if you don't believe it.

Hold on,
Don't let yourself slip away,
People may miss you.

Prevent yourself,
From falling into the darkness like this,
Hold on.

Reviews

[Nickelass]

Short, yet gets the point across very well. Good Job!

[Canicus]

Simple words, yet a meaning so much deeper. Good job I like this.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I love this one! You seem like a wonderful writer, keep up the great work!

[Mark Andrew]

A great poem.

[TWISTED NIGHTMARE]

AMAZING...even though its sad it has something about it that almost seems empowering...you put a lot of raw emotion and thought into it and it really shows...loved it