It's Not Okay

I've been pretending to be okay,
But I can't hold onto this forever,
It's not okay...
What you did...

You effected everyone that loved you,
I'm one of those people,
It's not okay,
Because you don't know how much I miss you.

I loved you so much,
I wish I understood you more,
It's not okay...
I wish you were still here...

Author's Note

UGH!

Reviews

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This is a familiar feeling, and a good write.

[Adalynn]

Mising someone never goes away but it gets easier. Great write.

Adalynn

[Alana McGuire]

Aww, this is very heartfelt and well written. You can easily see how much you miss this person and you're very good at wording it well into a poem. :)

[Charile]

Love it, I could relate so well,. You got your message thru without too many words

[Ms.Bri]

..That was good! Fully expressed yourself in few words. I have felt this way and to read this i know I have not been the only one to feel this way. Keep writing

[SINDE]

Honest free verse. Sometimes writing is just about being straight-forward in relaying a particular message. And I liked this.

[Leslie Philibert]

Nice honest poem.I believe you.Good work.

[Emunah June.]

The feeling hurts, I know.

I cannot say I truly understand what your feeling exactly, but Im sorry you are hurting. :(

[Canicus]

wow, from the very first line I felt the pain coming from this. You did an excellent job.

[Thea]

Aw...Pretending to be ok is simply painful...It's just, you have to fake a smile although it hurts so bad! Your emotions are well put up in here! Great work! :)))