MNL-Prologue

I always will write a short prologue. Chapters will be longer hopefully. Hope you enjoy.

Prologue

            Tears were streaming down my face as I watched the boy I love walk away from me. It was the first time I had ever gone through something like this. He was breaking up with me. The only thing going through my head at that point was…he never wants to see me again. What did I do to deserve this? I have never done anything to him, but I’ve let him get away with doing things to me. I was always forgiving; wasn’t it my turn to be forgiven? Still, I don’t know what I have done wrong. He didn’t tell me.

            “I just need some time to think things over. I know you love me, Aubrey, and I love you too. I just think it’s time that we go our separate ways for a just little while,” Jonathan told me. I could feel my heart breaking in two after he said those words.

            “H-How much t-time do you think w-we need,” I asked him looking deep into his eyes.  He walked towards me a little more and wiped away one of my tears. My heart started fluttering in my chest when I felt his touch.

            “I don’t know, but just always remember that I love you. We just need a little bit of a break. We have been fighting way more than we should be. It’s just causing the both of us unnecessary stress. We are too young to have this kind of stress,” Jonathan responded. I tried to say something, but I couldn’t think of anything to say. I was letting his words sink into my mind and heart.

            It took a couple of minutes before I could say something. “I know we have been fighting a lot more lately, but a lot of couples do. Don’t you think you could just talk to me before we make such a drastic decision? I know in my heart we could work this out. We both have gone through far worse than this.”

            “I don’t think so, sweetheart. We need to just wait until everything cools down between us. I just don’t want you to get overly stressed about all of this. I feel like this will make our relationship grow stronger,” Jonathan responded. Jonathan kissed me on the cheek before he started to walk away.

            I went back into my house, locked myself in my room, and started crying harder. I didn’t want to be disturbed by anyone or anything. I just wanted to be left alone with my thoughts for a while. My parents probably could tell that I was in no mood to talk to them or anyone for that matter. I was just happy that my parents respected my wishes.

            I pulled out my journal from my usual hiding spot. I started to write about how I felt at that very moment. It was like my heart was ripped out of my chest and fed to a hungry pack of wolves. My eyes were still filling with tears as I wrote my feelings down. I let the sadness, the anger, and the pain flow through me. Writing was my release for everything that I was going through. My journal was my safe haven…it held all of my secrets. My journal has been with me through a lot of the tough times.

            When I was done writing in my journal I lay back on my bed, looked up at the ceiling, and started to drift to sleep. Crying really made me tired. I closed my eyes and knew that tomorrow would be a brighter day. Boy was I wrong.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Charile]

Oooo i like it, sad tho but still good!

[Sucker Punch]

I love it! Its really depressing but I can relate to this a lot

[Silent Knight]

It is good so far! Kinda super sad. I will read more soon.

[Leave me alone....]

awesome! great way to start this off, can't wait to read more :)

[:DI laugh too much:D]

this is a really great start, you described the character's emotions really well, everything is so vivid.

continuing on =]

[No name]

I hate breaks/ break-ups, they're never fun. Will like to see what happens for her and Jonathan, will so keep reading.

[Emunah June.]

How sad!! Although I think Aubrey may be over-reacting, after all he did say he'd come back, AND that he still loved her. I can see him just taking a break. Maybe things'll work out for her...?