Frozen Pain

Basically what I'm feeling like, but also inspired from NANA

I say I’m okay,

But inside there is,

Frozen pain.

That I don’t need or want.

 

The frozen pain,

Is in my veins,

And it can’t escape,

But I wish it could.

 

Someone protect me,

From the frozen pain,

Because I don’t think,

I can do it myself.

Reviews

[Jeffery-Maximilian-Kolb..]

Very Deep write.

[Ezekiel Silver]

Very simple and short. Yet with a meaningful message still. Good poem.

[jennifer little]

wonderful poem loved reading it

[Missy Moooooo]

Very nice write. I can relate.

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Frozen pain...that's a good concept. It makes you cold and dead inside, yet all you can feel is pain? That's what I imagine when I think of those words. It's a good poem. Me gusta :3 I can relate to the first stanza (and the second, and the third...xD) good write my friend ^^