Tears, Screams, and Agony

Screams,
That's all they heard,
Pain,
Was all she felt,
Tears,
Flooding down her face,
Agony,
Holding herself in a ball crying.

Screams,
From down the hall,
Pain,
She couldn't take,
Tears,
Looking at her skin black and blue,
Agony,
Not much to say there.

Screams,
While being thrown into the wall,
Pain,
Mostly what she felt,
Tears,
Now streaming,
Agony,
Going to be ended in seconds.

Pills,
What almost kills her in the end.

Reviews

[Perfect Mistake]

Ah great poem. Loved the story that was told throughout this, makes you feel for this person. Good work

[joshua deathdealer]

Wow I love this Angie. I like how you repeated the heading and the ending helps bring this poem to a screeching halt. I love it!!

[Hana Linzi]

I like the poem. i can really hear a girl screaming and crying and then see her in that pain and in a ball very powerful

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This is very powerful...very sad, but very powerful...the repeating and then the last two lines alone...very good job Angie.