...Why?

Why do I have to feel like this?

That no one wants to talk to me,

Or even be my friend...

 

Why do I have to cry?

Or feel alone at all,

I really want to know.

 

Why do I not go out?

Do people not want to be around me,

I guess I should just go to sleep.

 

I shouldn’t care anymore,

Because no one else seems too,

Oh well…..

Reviews

[Steven Cash]

Aw I feel for you

[Angie Diane♥♥]

I always feel that way :c

[Tomás Ó C..]

We all have those days, even oldies like me!!!

[Eleanor]

I really, really like this. Amazing job.

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thanks girl. :D

[coma black☯]

This is absolutely amazing and really really relevant for me, and probably lots of other people. Great job, Angie :)

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thanks babe :)

[The Watcher]

This is a really deep poem filled with emotions. I feel a strong vibe of helpfulness and despair behind your words, and I can comprehend just how painful it must be. It's a beautiful poem, and I hope you can rediscover happiness someday. Kudos to you, and good luck in the future.

100/100

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Feelings that relate,
Kills more when our brains always keep reminding us.
Great :D

[ChaoticSoul]

I like this because it sounds like it could be a diary entry, but you turned it into a more meaningful poetical piece. It showcases relatable human emotions that we have all probably felt before. It also sounds like it could be a verse from a song.

[Chrishauna Thompson]

This shows strong emotion I love it!

[Tasha]

This is sad, I hope you don't do that...you are better than that. Well written piece.

[Whiskurz]

What a sad piece....Very well written.......Whisk

[Angie Diane♥♥]

Thank you for the review.