All of Me

Picture perfect,
What I thought I had to be 
A perfect picture,
Is what I tried to be

I was foolish
To think this was true

Trying to be
What I'm not set out to be
Was already damaging me
I'm shredding some of me,
Just so you can like who I'm not?

I found out the hard way
How much I mean to me,
If you want a piece of me
You need all of me

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I think you did a really nice job on this poem. I loved this a lot. I loved the flow of the poem. I also like the rhythm of the poem. Good job. Thanks for sharing.

[Ashley June Canfield]

Nice Job.

[Daydreamer54]

Meaningful! rather have a person to like me for me than a person i pretend to be. if he doesn't like me for me, than his lost! Great poem! Everyone wants to be liked for who they are.

[Radioactive]

True.... about growing up, life in general. Just amazing. Love the rhyming scheme.

XX Maddie

[Short.Nerd]

THis is a great poem! I really liked it. Good Job(:

[watch_the_world]

this is AH-MAZING!!!! XD love it, i dont know if this was on purpose but it kinda had a rhythm to it. fantastic job xD