My Life

My best friend, My lover, My wife, you are the light in my morning you are the twilight in my night, you are the glow that brightens my soul.  You bring me peace when all I have is chaos, you bring me contentment when all I have is fear.  We bring each other through the trials of life step by step. Learning and growing every way.  You have the knowledge of my faults and the memories of my accomplishments.  You make me crazy with ecstacy.  You make me crazy with passion.  My best friend, My lover, My wife, you are my life.

Reviews

[Angelic Darkness]

A beautiful poem for one that you love. I felt the emotion:).
I will however say you need to put this in my of a poetic form
by separating the stanzas, and with shorter lines. It is a good
poem, so keep up the good work..AD

[Xfaerie corpseX]

A really good piece. I like the flow of it. its really sentamental obviously too. you have a talent, being able to put that much emotion into it and being able to make it flow clearly....well done