Undead

A Poem by Eddie Davis

A Senryu

My past kills my hope,

Yesterday lives forever,

Tomorrow fades away

© 2014 Eddie Davis

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Ina

I love this. You're very talented at taking the most minimum of words yet still getting a powerful message across. I can definitely relate to the first line.

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thank you Ina, I tend to have dark periods and this poem flowed out of it.

Blue

Past, yesterday, tomorrow... You penned this brilliantly and the word play is wonderful. I can't wait to read more of your senryus.

My favorite of yours! :) Very clever.

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

Thanks, I always look forward to your reviews and comments.

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Added on February 27, 2014
Last Updated on February 27, 2014

Author

Eddie Davis

Springfield, MO

About

I'm a fantasy and science-fiction writer that enjoys sharing my tales with everyone. Three trilogies are offered here, all taking place in the same fantasy world of Synomenia. Other books and stor.. more..