Not the Real Thing

A Senryu of a dreamer

Reality bores,

Fantasy fills all my thoughts,

Life is just a dream

Reviews

[Blue]

I'm glad that you enjoy writing senryus, Eddie. The form seems to suit you well. I've read lots of senryus on this site and most of them are serious or nature-inspired. Yours are brushed with comical, entertaining, and somewhat realistic portrayal of things. You are getting better and better. If you want to improve more, you can look at Pryde's works. She's truly gifted in writing senryus and maybe you can learn some tips from her. :)

I love this one. I can relate to this very well.

[Eddie Davis]

Thanks, I do indeed like them, but I'm running out of ideas.