Internal Combustion

Internal Combustion

A Poem by Eddie Davis
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What fuels lust?

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A Creature of Lust,
Consumed by fires within,
blame the Internet

© 2014 Eddie Davis


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They expose flesh like meat on sale. They circulate a very distorted picture of beauty and worth. They poison people's mind with carnal desires, provoking us to give birth to horrible crimes.

I like this, Eddie. I think "Internet" should be changed to something more general like "media". But it won't be in the right syllable count... Hmm.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Eddie Davis

11 Years Ago

Thanks, Blue, yeah, I wan't totally pleased with that last line either, but I feel the internet is t.. read more
Blue

11 Years Ago

Perfectly understandable, Eddie.

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Eddie Davis
Eddie Davis

Springfield, MO



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I'm a fantasy and science-fiction writer that enjoys sharing my tales with everyone. Three trilogies are offered here, all taking place in the same fantasy world of Synomenia. Other books and stor.. more..