Red eyes

A Poem by Eddie Davis

A Senryu of deadlines

A deadline awaits

All night I work on writing,

sleep is but a dream,

© 2014 Eddie Davis

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Great Aunt Astri

I like the picture! Sometimes a situation is best 'slept upon'! A very evocative haiku. Well done

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

Thank you.

Dhaye

That's something nerve-racking, Eddie. Too much work can pressure us. Hope next time, you can finish your assignments before the deadline. Lack of sleep can be the cause of many health problems. LOL.

Nice vent in 17 syllables.

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

Thanks, you're right, sleep is essential to good health.

Glass Heart Inc

Poor thing. Sounds stressful.

Posted 11 Years Ago

11 Years Ago

thanks for reading it.

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Added on April 24, 2014
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Author

Eddie Davis

Springfield, MO

About

I'm a fantasy and science-fiction writer that enjoys sharing my tales with everyone. Three trilogies are offered here, all taking place in the same fantasy world of Synomenia. Other books and stor.. more..