A First Kiss

A SHORT poem inspired by a kiss I once received...

Moistened with gloss, yet romantically awkward...
the sound of her fading heels mocking my hearts song.
Perhaps the sexiest taste of cabernet and tobacco.
I stood teetering; vacated parched and craving...
...another drag.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[DaturaBlossoms]

I really like the imagery here.

[Marie]

This has the taste and feel of a kiss. I like short poems; often they say a great deal.