You...

I look into your eyes,

and see a world that's new to me.

It comes as a surprise,

That I can stare so easily.

You say what's on your mind,

and it all sounds so beautiful.

Our words become entwined,

in conversation that's colourful.

You're passionate and true,

and ambitious to the end.

I'm just too scared to tell you,

I want to be more than just your friend.

So...

I'll be the friend you need,

even though I feel my heart bleed,

It's love for you.

Reviews

[Cheryl J. Turner]

I love it! It's such a new romantic side of your writing.

[Red]

It's absolutely perfect up until "I'm scared to tell you". After that it just needs some refining. Fabulous poem, thank you.