The Shores Of Life.

Romance in Rictameter.

Dreaming

Those days gone by

Each wave crashing cymbals

Pounding onto those shores of life

The great days of keen pirates and Shanties

Omen riding on the crests of waves

Thunder's rolling drumbeat

Echoing sounds

Dreaming.

x

Dreaming

Sea's in my blood

Fishing a simple life

Survival the name of the game

Muscles and winkles a-live a-live ho

Each net full's heaving abundance

Those dreams so true to life

Neptune's wonders

Dreaming.

x

Night time

A cloak so dark

An intrusive feeling

Pierces the canvas of darkness

Paths to follow to find inspiration

Glorious wonders never to fear

My heart will lead the way

Halos of gold

Night time.

x

Each dream

Stories bewitched

On the shores of true life

To sit in anticipation

Fantasising each tugging each glory

Today tomorrow thereafter

So precious and treasured

Wondrous belief

Each dream.

Reviews

[Vria P Crow]

INTRODUCTION

Here is some vocabulary I enjoyed:

1. cymbals: musical instrument. I have never heard of this musical instrument before. Therefore, I am looking forward to listening to a video that exemplifies it.

2. Neptune's dreams: Beautiful and stunning! This phrase really set my mind into the surreal realm of spirals of the galaxy.

3. Intrusive feeling: This is an incredible depiction of the night time scene! Subjectively, I would imagine it to be filled with imaginary creatures hiding in the dark.

FAVORITE QUOTE
Each dream

"Stories bewitched

On the shores of true life"

Beautiful conclusion! I imagined a lighthouse in the distance calling to the dreamers of the sea!

CONCLUSION

It is difficult to be an idealist of dreams. Cynicism is the predominant force in society.

How do we overcome such hostility?

Great work!

[Eddy Jones]

Thank you so very much Ria Vero this wonderful comemnt is so appreciated.Looking forward to reading many more by you also.

[Vria P Crow]

You are very welcome:D

[Frieda P]

Nice flow to this, I like your dreams.

Muscles and winkles a-live a-live ho
Each net full's heaving abundance

Now there's a real picture of a seafarer.

[Ken Simm.]

A tight and romantic shanty. This flowed like the sea it was born on.

[Eddy Jones]

Thank you Ken and enjoy your day.

[Angi]

Now I can read it! This is so calming to read. The wave structure and flow trips off my tongue wonderfully when read aloud. I smiled at the a-live a-live ho reference. Nicely done, Eddy!

[Eddy Jones]

So glad you enjoyed it Angi and your comment so greatly appreciated.Looking forward to many more by you also.

[Angi]

My pleasure!

[iliOZ]

what can i say?
while sitting on the shores of life i could feel the waves rolling your rhymes around, more than that i can even see them by just looking at the shape of your verse
enjoyed it, thanks

[Eddy Jones]

Thank you so much iliOZ your comment so appreciated and here's to many more for us both to share on here.

[The Girl That Let You G..]

Wonderful...great work!

[Eddy Jones]

Thank you so very much The Girl That Let You Go.Here's to so many more for us both to share on here.

[lisat]

and so is this

[Eddy Jones]

Thank you so very much lisat.

[Aethereal]

Fabulous! You've created a wave structure that speaks of waves of endearment. All the nodes connect.

[Eddy Jones]

Thank you so much Aethereal your words greatly appreciated.

[popourii]

You executed this beautifully thank you so much for sharing! :)

[Eddy Jones]

Thank you so very much popouri ; your comment so appreciated.
Eddy.

[popourii]

Of course! Anytime!