To Love.

Rictameter : To Love.

 

 

 

To love

Wonders we'll share

Each path will lead us there

Each breath we breathe;each song we sing

Hold my hand and believe,no doubts, no pains

The open air is paradise

The path to each heart shines

A golden gift

To love.

 

 

Haiku: In Your Heart I Belong.

 

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Oh how you beckon

In your heart I do belong

An aria a song

 

Acrostic: To Love.

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Treasured and precious

Oh how I rejoice

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Lay your head on my shoulder

Orchestral love songs prevail

Verifications so honest so true

Eternal love bathed in honesty, in life.

Monorhyme:Find Your Dreams And Follow.

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Caress that heart so mellow

Your stiff pride you must swallow

Your heart cannot be shallow

Find your dreams and follow

In your wondrous love song.

Rhyme:Is Each Story Told A Myth??

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Is each story told a myth

Is each promise made to be broken

Is the sunshine behind each cloud

Is each dream to be forsaken.

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Will we find it in our hearts to forgive

Will each broken heart still shine;

Will there be a reason to care

Follow this heart of mine.

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Will there still be lessons to be learnt

Will ther still be songs to be sung

Will there still be wonders to be seen

To this loving new life I clung.

Freeverse:That Magical Place Called Love.

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A place which is there for us all?

That magical place called LOVE.

A place where time stands still;

where worries and doubts do not linger.

That magical place called LOVE.

A place where we will never be lonely

where our hearts will never be pained;

each hunger sated

and each thirst refreshed.

That magical place called LOVE.

Fresh fields and daisy chains;

light footsteps

and happy hearts

will lead us to

That magical place called LOVE.

To be alone when surrounded by people

a room so vacant

although so full.

A heart so pained

even though lips smile.

Follow your road

follow your path

To that magical place called LOVE.

Each silence can be so loud

each sunshine behind each cloud.

but each heart sings

happy days they'll bring

as we find our way

To that magical place called LOVE.

Oh how the skies are blue

Oh my beautiful white dove;

Together we'll find

That magical lace called LOVE

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Reviews

[Aethereal]

These are all beautiful love poems. I like how the first one reaches out at the center, grasping. Perhaps using the first two line of your first poem you could try this format for another poem:

Down paths that we share,
great wonders will stir.

Now the list all the wonders using rhyming couplets.

[Eddy Jones]

Thank you so much Aethreal for taking the time to stop by and comment.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like these, but...the senryu is absolutely perfect.

jacob

[Vria P Crow]

INTRODUCTION

SUGGESTIONS

1. As a suggestion, I would put each poem into a separate writing so the audience can focus one at a time.

LOVE POEM OF FOCUS

1. Rictameter : To Love.

Vocabulary I Love:

1. Rictameter: I love the lyrical voice that is hidden in the poetry as we read it out loud.

2. A golden gift: This is an interesting color choice. Red is often what it is often chosen for love. However, I like how you replaced the generic color. Well done!

Subjectively, a "golden gift" means precious.

Why golden?

3. Paradise: I love the reference to paradise. It is beauty. It is love. It is not religion. It is spiritual.

Well done yet again!

CONCLUSION

1. The rest of the poetry was just as beautiful. However, I would have dissected it piece by piece if each was separate. The format is an original idea. I am just unsure if I like it, to be honest.

2. The pictures are wonderful! They compliment the poetry well.

3. What made you choose this format?

[Eddy Jones]

Oh thank you so much for this indepth advice comment;it is so appreciated and I shall most certainly take it on board. I think there was a particular reason why I chose this format .I had a new camera as a pressie and have realised I love photography also and simply got onto the habit of formatting in this way.However I am now taking your advice on board and again thank you so mcuh .I am really enjoying myself on here and wish you a great day also.

[Vria P Crow]

You are very welcome:D I am happy that my advice helped! Photography is beauty; it captures realism.

Happy writing!

["writing by" KS]

Beautiful poetry. Thank you for brightening my gloomy Tuesday morning Eddy. :)

[Eddy Jones]

You are so very welcome 'writing by' KS and I look forward to reading your work also.
Your comment so appreciated and enjoy your day.
Eddy.

["writing by" KS]

:)

[Stella Armour]

i am so pleased to meet someone else who enjoys writing in form Eddy, it isn't overly popular on this site so you get a big thumbs up from me..your poetry is delightful..

[Eddy Jones]

Oh thank you so much Stella and looking forward to reading your poetry too.
Eddy.

[The Girl That Let You G..]

They are all beautiful heartwarming poems. Wonderful works

[Eddy Jones]

Thank you so very much The Girl That Let You Go and here's to so many more for us both to share on here.
Eddy.

[The Girl That Let You Go]

Indeed ma'am, to the many more to come :D

[lisat]

Absolutely gorgeous, friend

[Eddy Jones]

Thank you so very much lisat and here's to many many more for us both to share on here.
Havea wonderful day.

Eddy.

[Cassie]

This one has left me smiling, and my mind...ohhh its wandering some places ..*Smiles*

[Eddy Jones]

Thank you so much Cassie your comment greatly appreciated.

[Ken Simm.]

You cover so much ground here in what is a vast subject, it becomes a little too much if you don't mind me saying so. I feel that publishing seperately would heighten the impact of these real gems to love.

[Ken Simm.]

And welcome to WC. I'm sure you will enjoy.

[Eddy Jones]

Thank you so much Ken and your advice taken on board greatly appreciated.

[zainul]

I read the pieces as spellbound.
They are so magical and enjoyable!

You may love to post each piece separately.

[Eddy Jones]

Thank you so much zainul and thanks for your advice which I will take on board. This is only my first whole day on here and I am enjoying myself immensely.
Looking forward to reading many more of yours also.
Enjoy your day.
Eddy.

[zainul]

This is a good day for the writers of WC too.
They have found a new writer who is talented and blessed with many virtues.
Enjoy your time with the wonderful community of writers :)

[Eddy Jones]

Oh thank you so much zainul ;your comment so appreciated and thank you also for making me feel so welcomed.

[zainul]

This is all my pleasure :)