vision

radiance

in the sway of words

falling from bright wings

music and dance

in the play of leaves

across a sky of climbing blue

the glory of sweet life

echoing ave maria

from canyon walls

and you

standing in the summer sun

within my portion of forever

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Again, you take words and weave them into tapestries.

[Dr. Wood ?]

beautiful poem sir, puts my own comic blurb deeply into the shadows. you deserve more reviews on this

[Ed Hart]

thank you for your kind words

[CD Campbell]

Nice tribute to whomever the muse might be. I like this one. CD

[Ed Hart]

wife of fifteen years...i am fortunate beyond measure...thanks for the visit

[The Brazilian Poet]

Marvelous poem -full of beauty and sensibility! A very poetical way of saying! Congratulations!

[Ed Hart]

nice words, nice smile

[alanwgraham]

Something indefinable happens when certain words are placed together and you seem to have done it here!
Simply superb!
ALAN

[Ed Hart]

what a nice thing to say...thank you Alan

[Pryde Foltz]

The divine is felt most strongly with mind. A truly beautiful write:)

[Ed Hart]

thank you for enriching my page with your words

[Stone Fox]

This is so tantalizing.

The lines:
"and you
standing in the summer sun
within my portion of forever"
is one of the most pure vows I've come across.

Thank you for this ripe piece of language.

-Stone

[Ed Hart]

nice to have you stopping by

[mysticgmekeepr]

Amen. Within your portion of forever is the Ave Maria and the Hallelujah.

[Ed Hart]

that's what we get, a portion...some of us are blessed with many courses, and keep on keeping on...like us do

[armin]

Ed, It's very cool and romantic.
Top to bottom
i had an excellent read.

Armin. ..

[Ed Hart]

make it into a song

[armin]

haha. .. why not?

[Beccy]

Edward, how beautiful and touching this is. The whole is sublime, the last stanza exquisite.


Beccy.

[Ed Hart]

thank you, sweet Beccy