deco

the lamp

wearing a severe shade

is elegance

soft light

bathes the gold collar

before cascading

a slendering glass

of blackest blue

a hint

of egypt-age goddess

                                captured

by a single gold slipper

she waited

on that thrift store table

for me

Reviews

[Donald Meikle]

I didn't buy it either Ed you just can't trust those people

[Ed Hart]

i did buy it Donald, and like Patsygirl, i never cease to admire, and so does she

[Donald Meikle]

I wuz kiddin witcha somebody as to or yerats wont fit

[Ed Hart]

and thank you for that Donald

[. serah .]

-- wow, Maestro Ed... -- i haven't read such a divine enunciation of how one who recognizes true art picks the quiet (almost invisible) masterpiece in a thrift store... -- and this symphony also highlights how the one who notices masterpieces just about anywhere lives in a different world... always observing beauty, celebrating it and sharing it generously with others... -- thank you for being a connoisseur in the truest sense of the word...

[Ed Hart]

and thank you for being a connoisseur serah

[. serah .]

-- wow... you say the most magical things ever, Maestro Ed... :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

geez, Ed....the way you work with personification...the whole Egypt goddess thing...

great images here...you bring the lamp to such beautiful life...

thank you for this poem, tonight...

i am inspired.

j.

[Ed Hart]

thank you jacob for your clear eyes