taking turns

lives i lost

at corners of divergence

could have gone anywhere

some might have danced

or smoked a lousy death

or got shot

because one fool met another

you are in this one

and look what your heart

has made of me

Reviews

[boblakin]

Those twists and turn along the way is what makes life so interesting. Glad that you found and kept hold of the best parts.

Boblakin

[Ed Hart]

thank you Bob...i have a feeling you know about twists and turns

[Renée]

I am taking this as a positive out come on your heart.. it amazing the turns in life, that lead to the one that stays.. those last lines leaves a smile..
I hope you don't mind..but your piece reminded me of a song I use to listen to...
trace adkins "comin' on strong" it's a cute song about a tough guy, a woman's soft touch, and what it does to him..

[Ed Hart]

i never was really a tough guy, but i fooled those that could be...now i'm and old man and everyday i count my blessing...thank you Renee, yes, a positive out come made of grace

[Renée]

I am glad you count them... grace is a wonderful blessing. ( :