Find the Path

double etheree investigation of a chosen path

war

centered.

big business.

oriented.

tending to blind faith

in politician's words,

in out-of-context God’s word,

and sensational media.

finding conspiracy evil in

deductive reasoning-based science.

rejecting freedom for others to choose.

not accepting anyone different.

why not love and be inclusive?

why not keep an open mind?

why embrace arrogance?

why judge others first?

the path is clear.

reach inside

to find 

peace

Reviews

[Tovli]

loved the flow! both in the form and subject. like two flowers blossoming at once. tovli

Again! (so sorry to be such a snail in reading and commenting--a lot of techno problems and life getting in the way!)

[James Paulin]

Thought process is a wave of reasonable facts or assumptions leading to a conclusion. War to peace is quite a topic for an etheree poem and you did an excellent job! Kudos