Grace and Trust

ten specific words within forty for a challenge

Our throats grow hoarse

as we laugh and sing together.

My eyes are infected 

with liquid love for no other.

Reflections of bright memories cascade.

I watch you sleeping with tender heart.

You’ve grace and trust without question, 

my love.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

You seem to conjur poetry into life! I hope the final line has been shown to the appropriate recipient!

[Radiohead]

Grace and Trust, both important componets of love. I think it's good. Nice....

[Tovli]

nice flow; i liked the way the rhyme made it all fit toghether. tovli

[Coyote Poetry]

In so few words. You said it all. Watching a love one sleep and peaceful. Allow us to soak their beauty into our heart. A beautiful poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Tate Morgan]

An emotional filled poem I like it
Tate

[Phibby Venable]

a very fine and gentle piece that moves the reader in a soft
flow through each line!