Intimate Sharing

8 lines about the Distance between us

intimate sharing, enjoyable discourse

unlikely paring, no need for recourse

I sit on your lap, and offer my love

conveyed with a tap through wires from above

The distance between us is very small

In fact it’s hardly there at all

Just place your finger on the letter ‘E’

The love that lingers is from me

Reviews

[safiredoll]

Very nice...I enjoyed this poem; it made me ponder about your images.

[emmajoy]

Superbly done.. clever! But, nonetheless tis gently done and gives exactly the sense of union you're intending.

[R J Askew]

Tis true, a great poem links two minds instantly and sometimes forever. They are javelins of this or that, in throught the eye down the optic nerve, deeper ...

[Honeypot]

I'm going to be honest and say I didn't get this at all the first or even the second time through, but on the the third time (I'm not a quitter.) I finally got it. and I love the subtilty of this. It's a love poem meant for some one special, who reaches out through her compute to touch you. It's really pretty. It feels like a secret joke. Nice job!

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful and gentle. A pleasure to read. You are a Poet.
Coyote

[Fabian G. Franklin]

This was fanciful and sweet as well as creative. I love it.

[TL Boehm]

ok, I do love couplets, no pun intended. These are sweet and as I read them, I think about my spouse....
Peace.

[Tovli]

nicely done--read like a little romance story. tovli

[Undying Glory]

pretty sweet and heartfelt poem. very cool