Lifeless

I've been experimenting with freeverse, and this is onle of two free-verse poems I feel is worthy of being presented to the public. I'm still trying to figure out what colour the contrasting words should be. This is about a fetus that's being aborted.

Growing;

           Life

Effort

           Less

Living

              Life

Care

      Less

Gaining

      Life

Living       

      Less

Losing

      Life

Living

          Less

Growing;

          Life

Waning;

          Death

Reviews

[Bev]

I'd say there is a lot of depth in the words, makes my heart ache.

[He@ther!]

This is soo amazing!!!!!:)
Completely inspiring, and once again, an extremely bold statement:)
You're a great writer!:)

Sincerely,

-Heather

[FuMiko]

It's very dark; sky blue seems like a bad color to have as the shadowing words.
Perfectly, you captured what people fear most in the act of abortion.