sleepy

just a simple thing

My eyes so heavy but I want to write 

should I write with my eyes close?

my finger already upon the keyboard with many of ideas to write 

but seems so hard to make a move 

my finger getting heavy and my sight became blurred 

should I write more words to say ?

maybe tomorrow or I will write in my dream

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

Aww ... i guess i am the first one to review but such a pragmatic piece... i like the theme it depicts the csse of every writer.. lots of ideas in mind but eyes too heavy with sleep.. i loved the image when finger becomes heavy and vision blurred aptly describing the state of being enveloped by sleep.Nice write.keep writing .

~Sophy

[Edward Lancheister]

Thanks Sophy for stop by and give the review. it just a simple thing that would happen with the folded creativity

[Laminators Dubai]

You must be writing homework for sure...LOL and that's normal in that case thou ^^
Seriously. . .you have done a very interesting subject in a very short but impressive way.

[Edward Lancheister]

lol thank you, common thing that usually happen for writer

[Laminators Dubai]

it happens to me too....and I don't think I'm a writer.

[Edward Lancheister]

okay then happen to the pople that write

[Laminators Dubai]

now that's call a promising write and writer :)

[Edward Lancheister]

Whatever. I thought its all the same. More spoken only bring foolish

[Laminators Dubai]

that tag me as a fool too @@

[Salem]

I had these moments when words comes late at night, and I done it once I stayed up to 4 am writing a poem.

[Edward Lancheister]

wow you have a great spirit to write. keep it up :)

[Salem]

I will, you too

[Ivory]

I have felt like this many times.. Losing track of time, but needing to finish just one more line.
Excellent piece : )

[Edward Lancheister]

Base for common thing that usually happen to writer. Thank you for your review Ivory. :)

[Ivory]

It was my pleasure ; )