Illusionary

Aching like stars falling down on the concrete, as the ocean pulls me into a parallel universe, I am complete, pushed in the back of my seat, I am defeat, --I am delete. Your lips, they feed on me, eating bits of flesh, you told me my heart tastes the best, but we're all like the rest. Speeding cars, they run through me, legs spinning, torso's racing, eye's ask me lets hit second base. There's a track, time continues to sprint, tick tock, tick tock, taking you away, electric shock. I'm dancing on a frozen clock. The ice can't melt the bodies because they're born frozen, the walls are closing in. sips of reality, leaving
me, and its all okay, just leave me living in infinity.

Reviews

[Sandy sunday]

x3 i luff it!

[Wondering Mind]

You've set a vey quick tempo/pace to this piece, adding to the effect of the message within. Again, you've included some very clever expressions. Original!