September Tuesday

Today,

         I am radiating lightning.

My heart is a battery,
pumping high voltage

and my eyes spark white.

I am the electric glass
dragon and I breathe out
flames influenced by the moon;

fiber-optic speech
and when I smile,
you can see the air
around me crackle
and smoke.

Reviews

[Chris]

So this is you being "sucky"? (Your words in the status box/tag line - not mine) you would likely blow out my monitor then with even a barely "good" one!...

[eglantine]

lol, yes to, perhaps I was just not feeling it. Thanks for reading

[eglantine]

I saw a beautiful person smoking a waterpipe of life's beauty... filtered with a glimpse of mystery. Excellent work.

E.L.

[eglantine]

thanks bunches E.L.

Anytime :)

[Marie]

You "sing the body electric..."

[eglantine]

Thank you Marie

[ROSALIND]

wow what a poem excellent work a perfection masterpiece of writing

[eglantine]

thanks as always Rosalind

[.]

Awesome work. "My heart is a battery,pumping high voltage" immediately caught my eye, and I love the surreal imagery you have displayed in painting in this beautiful masterpiece. Great job--as always.

[eglantine]

Thank ya much Moreski

[That_Girl]

I'm not sure where you come up with this stuff but I envy your talent. Another amazing piece! Well done!!

[eglantine]

Honestly, I had reached that moment of stress where I just had all of this energy surge through my body and I felt quite powerful lol alas, it passed quite quickly

[Alex]

This is great! Short and consise, love the modern use of imagery with the old idea of dragons :D

[eglantine]

haha, yea, dragons have crept into some of my recent poems

[Kaylor Mason]

Your soul is electrically charged . . . I can feel the current :)

[eglantine]

thanks for reading mason!

[bob, small b. aka invs]

very cool. i can imagine you sparking as you pass by, followed by the subtle smell of ozone.

[eglantine]

lol that's a cool image, thanks!