Back to you

Tonight the sky’s a dusty chalkboard

with a translucent moon cut from thin paper.

Love, draw me some yellow stars

so I can find my way back to you.

Reviews

[Abhishekizy]

This was a very sweet and powerful piece of writing. Absolutely loved it.

[Melobldnfr]

Eglantine, good to see you my friend. This piece is concise, crisp, clean, heartfelt, and tender. Always love your moon work themes!

[Aehr]

Love this so much! Such great description.

[Lily Finch]

Lovely...i love it specialy Last two lines...so nice

[Poetic champion composi..]

Nice................ ......,,

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle and powerful words.
"Love, draw me some yellow stars
so I can find my way back to you."
You said a handful in the outstanding poetry. The above lines I did enjoy.
Coyote

[MachinaWriter]

-sigh-
It's good to see things like this. It reminds me that poetry exists for a reason.

[eglantine]

aw well thank you! :)

[Emily B]

stars, perfect stars, pierced with love so the light can shine through

inspiring

[Leslie Philibert]

Eglantine is a talented poet I know well, a guarantee for quality literature. Fine poem, like the classical address to love as a personification, and a big central image that works very well. Advise all, read this.

[Simon Welsh]

Aye, but not since Bethlehem. Good poem.