Disintegration of eternity

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

she

mimicked

 

death because

 

I write

 

radiation

 

on the ocean.

 

--and the weather--

will eventually be needed.

 

QUESTION: Where will

the end disappear?

 

ANSWER: dust takes hundreds of years to decay entirely.

 

 

Author's Note

The text you read is not in it's true format--the newspaper picture I've included is the actual poem. It's a newspaper blackout poem. Take a news article, and black out words--chip away and find the poem :)

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Very cool !! I didn't got it completely but i loved it, tell me how to make one ! Do you black words randomly or do you follow a specific criteria and what about the ones you don't black out? Do you count them or do you just follow your instinct? xD
Thanks for this beautiful poem :)

[Alex Vidmar]

Love it,

[Amelie]

Coolio!I wanna try it on a tabloid- which is of the lowest kind of written medium in my country. Lemme see if I can do something interesting with it lol. Nevertheless, a nice attempt on a fathomless argument, you never fail to impress me ;)

[allie_arrowz]

that's such a cool idea!
did you come up with this? if not I'm totally doing it haha.
super cool dude. even if it didn't make total sense.

[Wild Willow Blue]

I read that all in the clipping, and then I got to the poem. Very nice indeed, I love blackout poems, I do these a lot myself.

[ROSALIND]

Not sure I even get this really

[joshua deathdealer]

Awesome!!

[joshua deathdealer]

I'm on it. lol I really like interaction you got going on here.

[AutumnBelle]

that is so cool! i'm gonna try it :)

[Rusty]

I like it very cool!