Gone, Gone, Gone

For those volatile as alcohol.

Fall in love hard

Fall in love fast

But once you get bored

Darling, you just forget

You're just like the alcohol

That's filling up your cup

You dizzy up their minds

Then you're gone, gone, gone

Reviews

[Inject Positivity]

Very interesting comparison... When they get bored in love or lose their interest in love they become like alcohol, making us feel like drunken and lost... I really like the concept of your poem, short yet speaks very thought provoking concept...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Alessander]

know this type of storm all too well. Sometimes the tempter, sometimes the tempest.

boredom kills.

love the gone gone gone

[William Steele]

Incredibly relatable. I have a little bias in dealing with an addiction to both myself, but I must say I appreciate your view on the comparison and really do enjoy your style here. Keep up the writing, my friend.

[Elizabeth J. Gelinger]

Thank you very much

[AaliyahMorgan]

I love this! Short and very thought provoking. So many truths in so little words.