Raindrops

Summer Haiku

The rain was salty

As it ran cold by my lips

Fused with my own tears

Reviews

[samparks,sam]

The rain was salty
As it ran cold by my lips
Fused with my own tears
Touch to me, with nice feelings
such touch feel with realized me
Every where is happiness
Need it only recognized it.

[samparks,sam]

want to get your permission for add 3 lines in your poem

[Elizabeth J. Gelinger]

Sure, why not?